* update two pages * Apply suggestions from code review Co-authored-by: Johan Brandhorst-Satzkorn <johan.brandhorst@gmail.com> * docs: Minor updates to connect to target * docs: Edits * docs: Edits * docs: Edits --------- Co-authored-by: Johan Brandhorst-Satzkorn <johan.brandhorst@gmail.com> Co-authored-by: Dan Heath <76443935+Dan-Heath@users.noreply.github.com>