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Episode: 2536
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Title: HPR2536: Lostnbronx examines points-of-view and tenses in storytelling.
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Source: https://hub.hackerpublicradio.org/ccdn.php?filename=/eps/hpr2536/hpr2536.mp3
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Transcribed: 2025-10-19 05:00:47
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This in HPR episode 2,536 entitled Lost in Drunk Settman in Points on New and Tensin in
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Storytelling.
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It is hosted by Lost in Drunk and in about 17 minutes long and carrying a clean flag.
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The summary is Lost in Drunk Settman in Points on New and Tensin in Storytelling.
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Hello, this is Lost in Drunk Settman and you'll have to forgive me for the sound quality
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I'm in the car right now.
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Today I would like to talk about narrative point of view in Storytelling.
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Now usually this does refer to written works like novels or short stories, but it does
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also include the narrative portions of things like movies or television shows, games especially
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long cutscenes where the main character or narrator is talking about things that have
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happened or are going on in the story.
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It can be part of poetry or songwriting.
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It does appear in almost any type of Storytelling or fiction.
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Now what we're really talking about are four different points of view.
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The first is first person, then there's second person, then there's third person limited
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and then finally third person omniscient.
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Okay, now first person is simple.
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I got up and made myself some breakfast.
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Second person, he got up and made himself some breakfast or she got up or they got
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up.
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Third person, if say we're talking about someone named Joe, Joe got up and made himself
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some breakfast or made herself or made themselves some breakfast.
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Now third person limited and third person omniscient, they aren't distinct but they are
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also extremely similar in certain ways.
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In a small sequence like Joe getting up, they're both going to seem exactly the same.
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What are the advantages or disadvantages of these different types?
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Well, the advantage of first person is that you're inside the person's head.
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They are telling the story.
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They are telling you what they saw, what they smelt, what they touched and generally what's
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more important to the narrative.
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They are telling you how they felt about all of these things.
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They are telling you what it was that they themselves could see and couldn't see.
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It has great advantage if you want a certain immediacy to the main character.
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If you want the main character to become someone that the reader, and we'll go with reader,
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but again this can take any form, that the reader will take to their heart right away, that
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this is a character that we're going to like.
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Even if the character does unlikable things, now like is probably a strong word, maybe sympathetic
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is better.
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It could be a character that we come to love, that we really come to care about, but
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it doesn't have to be, and it can be a despicable character.
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Now, second person, the narrative form, he or she or they got up and made themselves
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some breakfast.
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It has the advantage of being very visual.
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You are outside watching these things happen.
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It has a real advantage when it comes to things like action sequences or a particular set
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of elements in the story that are visually striking.
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If I need to describe a thing outside that doesn't necessarily need to have a strong
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emotional appeal to the main character, that is a form of narration that we really want
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to have available to us.
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I can think of an example where the main character or characters are doing something somewhere
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and something gorgeous is happening outside of them and they're oblivious to it.
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They don't notice it.
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That can't have a really powerful effect within a story depending on how it's used.
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Now, third person limited, essentially Joe is doing this, Joe is doing that.
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Again, we are outside of the character, but we're not following just one single character.
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We are perhaps following all of the characters, but we're not that close to them.
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We might be able to tell or infer certain things about Joe and other characters by how they're
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doing.
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We might have very good views of them, what their faces look like, how they're expressing
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their emotions to the outside world, but we're not necessarily privy to their thoughts.
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We can be, but I'll go into that in a second.
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Now, that is the major difference between third person limited and third person omniscient.
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The omniscient narrator knows all of the thoughts of everybody involved.
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We're not just talking about Joe, remember, we're talking about Joe and everybody else.
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That is the power of third person omniscient.
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It's actually pretty popular in fantasy stories or other stories that have many, many characters
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that we have to keep straight.
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However, at least in recent years, there has been a tremendous bleed over between those
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two third person points of view.
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Very often, especially, again, in modern writing, we will have authors that jump between
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the two.
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We will see how the character looks, but we don't know what they're thinking, but maybe
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we know what the other person's thinking looking at them, and then it might flip flop.
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These are generally used for specific storytelling purposes that is to say we want a reader to
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be surprised by what the first person is doing or about to do, just the same way as the
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other person looking at them is going to be.
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The person looking is like, I don't know what this guy's thinking, I don't know what's
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going on in his head, and then that first person does something surprising, and the reader
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is surprised because the third person is surprised, and then we abandon that technique
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in the next scene, maybe we're in the other guy's head, or someone else's.
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Let's study this sort of thing a lot of times they consider that a weakness, I'm not
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so sure it is, and I'm not so sure that there should be such a hard distinction between
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those two techniques, because I've seen it done to great effect, however, like a lot
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of things, it can be overused, or it can be used by an inept writer, and then we have
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problems.
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Now, additionally, there are other points of view that can be pursued, but those are
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the main ones.
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The other one, a lot of times in poetry or songwriting is where you'll see that sort
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of thing, but I won't go into that because I don't myself, I'm not familiar with them
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very much.
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Now, understand that the point of view does not necessarily describe the tense of the
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story, and by tense I mean the period of time in which the story takes place, so first
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person, I did this, I did that.
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That is first person past tense.
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I am telling you about a story that already took place, so by definition you already know
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I'm going to live through this story because I'm telling you about it in the future sometime.
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I have survived whatever happened in this tale.
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You can already take that away from the very first sentence of the story, you already
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know I survived.
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Now there are exceptions to that, especially if you're talking about genre fiction, some
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sort of supernatural element where I'm telling you this from some other plane of existence
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or maybe I've become a member of the undead and I've come back to tell you what happened,
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but I still exist, all right?
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But I've also seen future tense and it's very unusual, but it does happen.
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I will go here, I will go there, I will do this, I will do that.
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I will get up and I will make myself some breakfast.
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Now it sounds predictive if you leave it like that, it sounds like I am telling you what
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I intend to do, but if you have an entire narrative told that way, it has a very different
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effect.
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It implies that the character has knowledge of the future and it gives the character
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a bit of immediacy that they wouldn't normally have and by immediacy I guess I mean it gives
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the character power, power over the future.
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This character already knows what's going to happen.
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Now you can play with that, you can play with it a lot and say that I will do this, I
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will get up and I will have my breakfast, but the phone will ring and it will stop me.
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My breakfast plans are shot, I can't have breakfast because I have to leave immediately.
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So it becomes stilted and pretty terrible right off the bat, but it can be used and
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in certain areas and used properly, it can have an effect that maybe other elements don't
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have.
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It can also imply mental illness, told that way.
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You can use it for a lot of different things, but generally you want to use it sparingly.
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Now, second person, he gets up, he gets up, hear that, present tense, he got up and
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had breakfast, past tense, he will get up and have breakfast.
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Now in a story you can use, he will get up and have breakfast when you're talking about
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somebody else and your expectations of them.
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Again, your character can have a certain amount of power over the future, some knowledge
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that other people don't have and predict what will in fact happen and has to happen because
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you know about it already.
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But he's outside, remember it's second person, we're outside watching it happen, complex,
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but it can have a narrative effect.
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Now third person, I can tell that Joe got up and Mary got up and Darren got up, these
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people all got up and they all had breakfast.
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And if we're being strict about our tenses, he got up, it is in the past, Joe gets up,
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that's the present, Joe will get up.
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Now it begins to sound an awful lot like second person, except again, Joe will get up,
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Frank will get up, Benny will get up, Mary will get up.
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We know about all of these people, all of these people, we can look at any single one of
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them as closely as we want and maybe we can properly interpret their expressions and
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from their extrapolate their emotions or their intentions for the future.
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These things can all happen in that tense.
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So yes, when you start mixing multiple characters, points of view and tenses, a story can get
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complicated very, very quickly.
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However, it is possible to use these things at the same time and still keep things clear.
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For instance, perhaps you have a science fiction story that's being told in the present
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tense and it could go something like in the future, I remember all of this happening.
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Joe got up and he made himself some breakfast.
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He is going to do this, he is going to get up and make himself some breakfast.
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Now depending on how you punctuate that, it could be all one sentence and still make sense.
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We are talking about a first person singular story being told in present tense, it's
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also using past tense and future tense all in the same sentence to try to tell a particular
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point.
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Basically talking about how Joe is getting up and making himself some breakfast.
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But there is a certain power behind this because the main character has knowledge of the future.
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We got that information not only from the larger context of the story but also just from
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that sentence alone.
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So it is possible to mix and match these things but you have to be very careful how you
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do it and of course that example is a poor one.
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But probably it gives you an idea or a sense of how this thing can flow.
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As you look at different books that you've read or stories or movies that have narration,
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I think you'll find that these different points of view and often tenses can really add
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or detract from a story depending on how they are being utilized.
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The better story gets out of its own way, right?
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A story that is using say present tense, it better be a good reason and it better
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pay that off really really well or else it stands out.
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I think that if I may be misremembering it but I seem to remember that the book Bright
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Lights Big City is told in present tense, second person.
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So you have a narrator who's saying you do this, you do this, you pick this up and you
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walk over there, you do this, you do that.
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It gives you first off a sense of immediacy because you're being told what's happening
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and it's happening about you so there's also a personal quality to it.
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It's also visual because we're outside watching it and you have a sense that you don't
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really have a lot of control about what's going on.
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You know I can think of other stories that have used these things at least for different
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parts of the story where maybe someone is narrating it or another character is narrating
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it or telling about something that happened.
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But you know sometimes it can be very very confusing so you want to be careful with that
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but sometimes especially if you have a complex tale with many characters changing the
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tense for a particular sequence like say someone telling about something that happened
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to them to somebody else.
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A lot of times you can help keep that part of the story straight from other things.
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You'll know who is talking about whom and when it happened a lot easier just by using
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that slight change in the tense and in the narrative flow.
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But it is very dependent upon the story and how it's approached.
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When you start mixing and matching you have to be very very careful.
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If you start changing it part of the way through you have to be very clear why you're doing
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it because you can't have a narrative change overall.
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You can have a narrative change of a particular part of a story that is buried within the
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main narrative but you can't have it change halfway through.
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You can't have a story that's joke got up and made himself some breakfast.
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I don't know why I'm getting up.
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I know I'm hungry.
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I can't remember if I ate last night unless you're making physical changes in the narrative
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structure to give yourself a sense of dichotomy there and it has to be clear that you're doing
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so usually with parenthetical spaces or perhaps something is an italics or it can be probably
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done with other types of punctuation.
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There are ways to get away with something like that but it is very hard and it's a mistake
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that many new authors will make is that they'll change their point of view throughout the
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story because you know again stories that do a lot of head hopping they really run the
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risk of that when you have many many characters and you're inside all of their heads you really
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run the risk of confusing your reader.
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And if you start making mistakes with points of view or with tense it becomes a mess and
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it becomes hard for people to follow them.
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It's an easy mistake to make and it's also very easy to see when you're outside of it
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reading it but when you're in the middle of the production part of it when you're creating
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your story these mistakes do crop up.
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They do happen but if you made that mistake say halfway through the story you may have
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a huge problem making it all gel properly.
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With a little care and a little focus generally you can avoid it and if you have very different
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points of view it's hard to make the mistake to begin with so having a first person story
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it's hard for that to turn into a third person say I'm mission.
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I got up and had some breakfast.
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It's hard for that to suddenly turn into Joe didn't know why he wanted breakfast.
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It would be hard for you to make that mistake so that's one way to do it pick one extreme
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or the other but that may or may not serve your story so you really do have to take it
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as it comes.
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At any rate this has just been a little bit on points of view and tense and a little
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bit about story structure.
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I hope that if you find anything here interesting you would consider leaving a comment for this
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